I enjoyed that very much. Some unsolicitated comments. I've never heard a train announced in the NYC subway system. I hear "nawnappentingontrikeiysevenff d". lol. I liked your character development, they were easy to empathize with. I say this alot, but I like some "color" in my stories. Smells, sounds, light/dark, rain/sun, hot-cold-humid-etc. It doesn't take much to set the background pallet. Just my opinion. Great story!
