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Re: The Next "Thermopoli"
good concept, but it could have been better.
maybe add more detail to the characters and the situation, such as why america is at war with itself again.
Also, a 40 man squad meets up with another 250 men, and its 300. how does that work.
maybe have less spartan refrences. it takes a bit of the origionality away from the story.
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