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Old 11-03-2008, 07:04 AM
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Re: Hallowed Tree

This is perfectly, exquisitely harrowing. Imagine a beautiful young woman, a singer/songwriter, rough around the edges now, writing this when she hits the bottom of the barrel of drug abuse. Great, stark images - Death, poison, corpses. This will be perfect when that scene comes. She finishes the song, blinks, and collapses on stage.

This is too fine, Bri. Great job!
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