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Old 11-03-2008, 08:45 AM
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Re: A journey through Tassels.

Really good stuff, throughout. I liked the ending, and didn't think it either abrupt or out of character.
The line about the vomit in the toilet made me laugh out loud. that's unusual.
One small point: I think you meant coiffed instead of quaffed. They're pronounced the same way.
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