It needs to be longer, with more detail added. also it could do with a few commas here and there, such as:
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more unknown killings to fill a library and that's just his background.
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Perhaps put a comma after library.
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Since then, Stulks has been locked in a level 4 security chamber two levels under the Institue, it is there I must talk with this man
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Add a comma after
then and lose the comma after
institute by replacing it with a full stop.
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Then, after his statement was made study up on Stulks to see if his behavoirs have changed
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Put a comma between made and study.
other than those minor things, it was a good begining. hope to see more in the future
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Now that ceaseless exposure has calloused us to the lewd and the vulgar, it's instructive to see what still seems wicked to us.
What still slaps the clammy flab of our submissive consciousness hard enough to get our attention?