Thread: Johnny Boy - Day 1
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Old 12-03-2008, 06:13 AM
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Re: Johnny Boy - Day 1
For me, the action felt a bit choppy. I would love to read a more in depth assassination scene. When Johnny is put through the windshield, don't you think that may kill him?
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