[Wesley]

I would love to see more time and refinement into this story. 1984 was a terrific story. The idea of an underground revolution however, would take some time to explain. Perhaps this all started from some of the higher ups?

I chuckled when the gin smashed on the floor showing that Tyler has no idea what is "essential" maybe this should come into play on more serious terms later?

Also, for realism's sake, a shotgun blast at the "implied range" would still kill you. I'm worried that the character is a bit too super-human.

I say this is a good start.