Ahw. I really love this poem!
It poses such a beautiful question, and it's so beautifully sad.
I really loved reading it.
At first I didn't like the repetition, but now that I look back, I do.
Really great job!
Very simple, yet beautiful at the same time!
I agree that it would look better with punctuation, though.
Really good job!
[I'm Taylor, by the way. I'm new here, though I write for a few other writing sites and have written & reviewed fpr a couple of years
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