Ya know, this story reminds me a lot of Princess Mononoke. And quite frankly, Princess Mononoke is my most favorite movie of all time.
This story was excellent, but just a couple questions. How does Lexine have the voice in her head? Was she born with it? Is it a demon? Is it a telepathic link and not something inside her head?
It would have better if it included a little more background of the hanera (and should that be capitalized?) but if you have the whole story going to someone, i guess thats ok.
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A demon. Lexine was a demon.
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Did you mean figuratively or literally? Did a demon have anything to do with the way she was acting? Was the demon actually a metaporic symbol of her hate and rage?
Once again, excellent story, and if it gets published, I could easily see this as becoming an anime.
