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Re: Jenna
I love ur story. From te start you have action, then you introduce the character of the killer Jenna McCoy.
To me Jenna -the little girl -her point of view could have been a little stronger as she grow up into her later years. I would have like the story to describe in more details about what she felt when she was 17 after Dr. Harrison was out of her life for 10 years.
But the realism of the story, how you discribe the setting and the action of the story really kept my attention through out. When the story came to the ending it made me want more. All great stories have great ending. Great job and keep writing.
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