[xtremelady]

Few thoughts – when he looked at the picture – why didn’t he inject what he already knew about her into his surmising of what her life was like? He knew a few things from staking out her house etc.

Lacey – description of meeting the mechanic...didn’t flow well for me.

Other than that the character’s motivations were clearly defined – the threads there – voices – impulses – and how he rationalised his actions. Like that not once did he question if what he was doing is wrong. Makes 1 wonder how he expects her to react to being kidnapped. There is also a lack of emotion which grabs you 2 – but not sure if this is intentional – because he displays awkward responses – blushing etc.

Very interested to see how this plays out.