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Re: The Sweetest Lullaby
Think needs more about the character – her background – her thoughts – how she feels – who the werewolf is to her/motivations – and how she regards him – what they mean in your story.
A good beginning hope to read more 
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Time; an elusive element to a creative mind. For the story burns to be expressed, flooding the mind, seeking an outlet. Red brimmed eyes and dark circles fore-tells a deeper story, echoed in a mirrors reflection. - my story.
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