18-03-2008, 06:19 AM
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Bri's Dark Angel
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 2,961
Total Points: 237,161.80
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Re: Unspoken Words
Okay - this couldn't have been easy. Deep and dark, complex, and well-handled. Writing from a male viewpoint - interesting. You did a good job with that.
Nupur, your growth as a writer seems to be exploding at an exponential rate. You took something heavy and made it accessible. Nice job! 
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