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Re: The Attic
It seems sort of that Jacob isn't all there, ya know what I mean?
I didn't quite get the ending. I did like how you described Jacob's feelings. Pretty good story. Your descriptive writing is very good.
What happened in the ending? Jacob disappeared? I do almost feel bad for Jacob though.
The way you wrote was good; story was iffy.
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According to Dante's Divine Comedy, Flatterers are condemned to the Eigth Circle of Hell.
Ah crap.
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