[WorldWarCheese]

I have absolutely no clue what just happened here? I mean, to me it sounded like someone was wrongfully arrested by a cop on a payroll from some non-government official so this guy could get a story about some politician's kid?

The reason for the arrest was never given, not even implied. Who is Victor's dad? Chet just said "Oh! I remember your name because you are THAT KID. Versus "You're that kids SON!" you know?

It looked to me, from the description that Victor was a kid at school. He saw people rallying and felt that there was a better way to inform the general public about issues. He then carried out his plan, it WORKED and was highly successful and more and more people came to him for serious debates. He sounds like a member of a debate team who's just a little nosy, yet talented and gets in everyone's discussions and defeats them.

No where do I see "Omigosh! He just beat the snot outa dat kid and got a bunch of hooligans and killed the Jews!" <-- WAS this a type of Hitler-Comes-To-Power type story? (Just wondering)

Also, how would the debate skillz carry over into something that could get him or his father in trouble.

I mean, it was well written, but the dialog was vague or just not descriptive enough to carry across what you were trying to say, I think.