Thread: Rachel's Special Rain
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Old 18-03-2008, 07:02 PM
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Re: Rachel's Special Rain
Irony's great. Good little story. I mean, a little funked up, but dat's okay. Dat's a good jive. Yeah. If you made it just the mother dying I'd laugh a lot more.

Irony of daughter killing mother with mistaken fluids and feels awful, making the reader feel awful which is TOTALLY fucking ironic for a reader to feel in a comedy. BAM!
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