That was a really good vampire story. Its really strange on how easily he decided to open up the door. It amazing what a pretty women can make you do.
There was one mistake that caught my eye...
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I better make sure my seaoned firewood was...
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Shouldn't it be "seasoned" not "seaoned"?
It seems like all the vampires now a days just want to kill the people. How stupid could they be! They should add to their bloodthirsty alliance! But they never seem to stand straight up out of coffins without using their feet anymore.
Otherwise...it was great.