I liked it. Not the best, not the worst. I never laughed out loud at any point but I'm also dog (get it, dog?) tired and it's early.
Some quick notes (I'll try and come back later to be more thorough):
I think the inflection should be on "cat", it sounds nicer when spoken.
Quote:
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"Dear... don't blame Charlie. He's only teething. You know... like a puppy"
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That's actually a pretty good "closer". Keep it.
There's more, but I gotta get back to work (Breaktime's ovah!)