This is the making of a good series. Sadly, I noticed a few errors. Like:
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Everything from a small RPG to a sword was contained in this armory. Johnny replaced his handgun. And went near the only other piece of furniture a shabby metal cot.
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You need a comma after furniture, and i think there is a fragment there. You need to make the last two sentences one.
Also... Crap! I lost the mistakes. Sorry. You may want to read the story again.
Good Story and I can't wait to hear the rest.