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Old 22-03-2008, 01:13 AM
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Re: No heroes Left in Dirt

Once again, an exceptionally brilliant war story. Yours are the only ones I like to read. I did notice an error or two.

Quote:
“Don’t worry, I here the Arabs kill the callow guys the quickest.”
I think here is supposed to be hear.

Also,

Quote:
There were only about five Soviets guarding the position, something that made no sense to me.
Soviets? In afghanistan? I am not sure if that's correct or not. Maybe I'm just stupid.

Overall, the story was excellent.

P.S. Yay! I got first post!
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