really good story, I enjoyed it, however i do have a 'thing' to point out.
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Originally Posted by Timmay
Synopsis: Maravar Pass
Sixteen plus dead. Fifty plus fatally injured.
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fatally injured means killed, so you might wanna change it, but it's up to you
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...was colder than a witch’s tit.
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Just out of curiosity, is this a reference to BioShock?
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Now that ceaseless exposure has calloused us to the lewd and the vulgar, it's instructive to see what still seems wicked to us.
What still slaps the clammy flab of our submissive consciousness hard enough to get our attention?