Good Work, and that was pretty long for a prologue. I spotted a few mistakes:
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They tested it on lab animals, and were stunned at what happened.
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It's tough to tell whether you meant the vaccine or the virus. Clarification would be good.
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Scientists added a chemical to this bomb that would cause anyone exposed to the gas to mutate uncontrollably.
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Some more clarification here would be good. You could change
scientists to
Korean scientists.
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They also grew moderately larger, some more than others,became more violent and had a much bigger appetite for meat.
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You need a space between others and became.
Good Prologue and I am definitely looking forward to more.