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Old 23-03-2008, 12:18 AM
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Re: Prologue to Plagued Nation

Thanks for the advice. I don't think i need to put Korean scientists in it. It makes it sound a little to specific. I will take your advice on...

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They tested it on lab animals, and were stunned at what happened.
I'll change it to "They tested the virus on lab andimals, and were stunned at what happened."

And i'll put a space between those words. Thanks DnDDmDb642, appreciate it.
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