Thread: Recon - Prologue
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Old 24-03-2008, 04:07 AM
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Re: Recon - Prologue
I like the storyline, I enjoy the plot, but maybe a bit more description. I have a hard time putting myself into a story if you don't have any clue what anything looks like, y'know? Keep it up though. It looks like it's going to be a good story
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