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Old 02-07-2005, 01:54 AM
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Re: Highway to Hell
lack of setting, description, a severely rushed pace like u just wanted to get to the end of the piece, bad spelling, overuse of punctuations. this piece is so bad that i stopped reading after the fifth paragraph. honestly, u can do a lot better. this is something u churn out 10 minutes b4 ur essay is due.
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