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Old 02-04-2008, 12:56 PM
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Re: Dark Night

I fine this story hard to follow at points. I feel that better works could have been used.

An example:
"The figure most have stood nine feet,..." - The whole description was hard to follow.

The other points have been brought up already...

This story reminds me of JeepersCreepers..... Scary movie *hides under a blanket*
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