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Re: I Saw Her In The Garden
It needs more back bone i like to call it. We don't know who Anna-Marie is or why the woman is getting so emotional over this angel until halfway in the story.
I do the same thing A LOT! So i just write every little thing and once i have finished writing. I proof read and see what doesn't have to be in it.
Oh, and i thought that was my Ann-Marie. lol
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