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Old 03-04-2008, 05:13 AM
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Re: I Tried to Warn You

You wrote a Hit Song those verse's are so catchy and the rhythm is great. The chorus is not as good as the verse's but if their tweaked a little it could be a top 40 hit.

The course u have isn't bad its just more of a per-chorus in my opinion so adding something after that would make it better.

Great job on the song, it's one of those I wish i wrote that songs
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