A very interesting ending. Can you actually do that? Pose as a person in jail to get a story?
Anyway, good story. I really liked the dialogue you used. It seemed very realistic. Only one thing, though. I do have to agree with the cheese and say that you never fully explained why the college kid was there.
This may be off topic, but what's the:
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"My, how annoying is this ten letter minimum?"
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