Thread: Tears and Beers
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Old 05-04-2008, 12:18 AM
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Re: Tears and Beers
Pretty good work, Kat.

Quote:
Are too full of your "dears."
should be:

Are too full of your "dears".

The full stop will come after the quotation mark.

Apart from the very minor error, I loved it. The bitter tone in the end is just too good.
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