[Themis Fallidas]

The first scene of a story you should continue writing, in my opinion. I must say i liked the title very much, but there is no mystery so far with this phone call! A serial killer maybe? If yes, you have exposed him very easily. You need to think about his motives, what is he after, his inner world. Creating a strong character is the most important thing, more important than the idea for a story. Try to work on your characters first and then on the plot.