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Old 08-04-2008, 07:56 AM
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Re: A Villanelle - The Moon's Leave

Whoa Bri! Villanelles scare the living shit out of me. Definitely rough to write, and you not only wrote one, but a decent one at that. Terrific work, and the effort you put in with your syllable count clearly shows. I have to agree with Lu, the last stanza is definitely my favourite as well.
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