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Re: The Carnage
" unknotted and slid the blondfolds from their... " Ok is blondfolds an intentional pun or a typo?
Aside from that, I think Hitchcock said it best when he said that if you just show a bomb blow up a bunch of people it is much less interesting than showing a bomb under a table that is about to blow up a bunch of people. In other words, your story was a fine description of a sick person carving up some victims, but if we knew anything at all about the victims or the killer, it would be infinitely more interesting... Gore, in and of itself, is not nearly as interesting as suspense ( a fact that a lot of modern horror film makers might want to take note of).
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