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Re: The Attic
Well, i must say that your story is very interesting. It made me keep on reading because i wanted to know what will happen in the end. So what happened to our protagonist? I'm sure you know the answer, or you are thinking of one! Very well described character and i got a clear picture of his feelings and thoughts. You served that aspect of the story very well. In the end of the story there is a fire! A fire lightened by curiocity! Please, consider writing more! This story can't end like this!
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