[Vail]

Well EP, on a completely emotionally detached level, not a bad piece. It's very simple in nature, and that helps it fit into a rhyming flow nicely. Normally I hate rhyming, but in pieces such as this, it lends itself nicely. You've got great flow, and the story you tell is painted fairly well throughout. Your little note at the top helps flesh out what's going on within a bit more. I actually went and looked up Naproxin and what it can do to you if you overdose. I had no clue it was just Aleve.

Umm.. on a completely twisted note, if you're going to overdose on a pill, you should probably pick one that just causes you to pass out and die, as opposed to one that eats away your stomach lining giving you ulcers...

Umm.. good piece, wouldn't say great as, aside from the emotional value, has no real aesthetic depth to it. Great effort though, and really nothing wrong with it. Thanks for sharing.