Whoa, you’ve got me completely hooked. Fantastic descriptions and dialogues. You’ve got all the mechanics right and your language and writing style is awesome. This is dark and gritty. The voice of narration is strong and firm, and yet has a lot of soul, like Gurdit mentioned. Very intense.
The prologue was just what it should be: catchy, captivating and an insight into your writing style. It was all that and more. I can’t add anything that hasn’t already been said, just want to tell both of you that this was fantastic. Keep up the great work. Now I’m off to read Chapter one.
BTW this is so totally POTM material. I’m going to nominate this one.