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Old 15-06-2008, 01:43 PM
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Re: DYLAN VORCLA: FIRST MOON Pt. 2

Oi! That was pretty intense, man. I miss Mel already, I imagine she will be back, but she won't be the same. She'll be a bad, bad girl when she comes back I bet. I'm hoping Vorcla's consciousness will surface enough to remember what Nilos did to Mel. I'm anxiously waiting to see what will happen to the prick.

Nilos is as strong as Dracula himself. That is interesting. The death of Nilos is sure to be a satisfying one.

Great writing once again, Rick. I couldn't find anything to pick at. The story is enthralling. Well done!
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