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Old 20-06-2008, 01:13 AM
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Re: DYLAN VORCLA: FIRST MOON Pt. 2

You know the instant you mentioned 'Count Dracula' I thought of your Dracula and Giselle series... and how you could almost tie this one in with it, going back even further, after Giselle, when he turns LaGory. (By the way I am still waiting for you to finish that one up, I have a soft spot for little Giselle).

I have to echo what Nupur and Kara said here, this was another fantastic chapter. It is softer than some of your stuff, most definitely your Werewolf Moon, but it still has that touch of Vorc.

The scene here was painful on a multitude of levels, the unveiling of family secrets, the video of his father, his girlfriend being sucked dry etc. Great play on the readers emotions.

Looking forward to more from you on this one!
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