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Re: Yesterday

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Originally Posted by Ryankia
On a note about the actual POEM at hand... :p

Yesterday;

I was late for my tea,
Cos' I went to the tree,
At the top of our hill,
With my little friend,Bill.

See, together we'd planned,
To climb tree hand in hand,
And then jump really fast,
Into green waves of grass.

But I went straight from school,
Breaking mum's golden rule,
See I'd asked could I go,
But my mum had said,no.

Still I'm glad I went up,
With a skip and a jump,
To the tree on the hill,
With my little friend,Bill.

Cos' this time I did reach,
That big branch on the tree,
With the bend at the end,
And so too did my friend.

And we had so much fun,
Just us two,..tree,...and sun,
Until Bill softely sighed,
"Here's your mum"..."Yikes !" I cried.

Cos' she looked rather cross,
When she found Bill and me,
She said "Me and Bill's mum,
We've been worried you see".

But I told her we'd reached,
That big branch on the tree,
With the bend at the end,
Then she just smiled at me.

Then;

As we walked down the hill,
Me,and my mum,and Bill,
We all counted to three,
And then cried......"GOODBYE TREE !
SEE YOU SOON !"......................... .

Yet again, another perfect poem...I think you are getting the hang of this poetry thing. Perhaps you could write a few for me :p ::grumbles::

Many thanks indeed

Colin
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