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Fortunately, the sudden opening and closing of the car door made her forget to breath.
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Again, your unique style emulates through your stories. The actual basis here is not something uncommon to a horror flick but you added your own flavor, and by making references to Texas Chainsaw you dupe the reader out of thinking this is just another stale horror tale.
I think what I enjoy most about your work are the little twists you add, like the end here, and the way the woman rationalizes eating something like 'skunk piss' and how she could care less - until she realizes it is human flesh.
I am very interested to see where this one goes. So far, this is my favorite of yours to date and I hope to see more soon
