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Re: Dylan Vorcla: First Moon (Part 14)
Yay, Gemma lives! Too bad about Stefanie, though. ^_^ Again, I didn't see this before the edits, so La Gory looks fine to me. Dialogue is good, action scenes are excellent (I think the one about the heart/apple has been highlightd a few times. Gah! I definitely cringed when I read that one. And there's something about the phrase 'body meat' that's so...picturesque. ^_^)
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I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)
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