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Old 02-09-2008, 01:35 PM
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Re: Stranger

Ah, Tricia - I read your poems sometimes and I get the chills - in a good way. Your stuff is just so great. The fresh, unusual imagery, the way you put it all together. Some of them are incredibly unusual - "like the alien slickness / of a flipped up eyelid." Makes me wonder where you come up with them. Makes me want to get better at my own poetry. This one rates a "damned fine." Great job, hun!
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