
20-09-2008, 01:25 PM
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Bri's Dark Angel
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Cincinnati, Ohio
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Re: Lucas
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Originally Posted by PaulJJ
Attention-grabbing. I like the blue font.
I really like this. These poems really are the best kind. Gripping read, well done.
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Originally Posted by Rain
Now that is something that definitly earned it's spot in the Heartbreak/Sorrow catagorie... simple and at times lacking in poetic touch(which isn't exactly a bad thing) but it was so heartbreaking and emotional that you barely could notice. I personally love simplicity... loved it personally... good stuff, Rick.
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Thanks, guys. Missed these first time around. Sorry.
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