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Old 04-11-2008, 01:23 PM
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Re: Holes

Jeez, Lu. What a wonderfully sad piece of writing. My favorite line has already been noted by the others above, but the entire piece was packed full of wonders. What I like about it is this: It is sad, but it seems like, just out of the picture, hope floats on the waters in the form of a life raft. I like to thing that is the case for this character.

Beautifully done.
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