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Re: Dylan Vorcla: First Moon (Part 20) - Conclusion

Thanks, Eric. Let's see...Amerind isn't extremely common, but that's why I used it. You were right about using "finding" to maintain parallelism; I changed it. That one got by me, but with 20 chapters, I think I'm entitled to an occasional slip. ^_^

Glad you liked the 'Shifting scene on the porch. I want to stick to my guns on that one and keep it. I still say Dylan would be under so much stress by then that this is how he would react, and the other two 'Wolves would react instinctively. Quimby is unflappable and doesn't Change (Kara and I decided Anthony Hopkins would play his part in a movie!).

Thanks for the read and comment.
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