[Storiesmaniac]

And arent i glad i stubbled into this...well actually i didnt stumble it was more of a... oh man i havent commented of bri's work in a while what the fuck is going on hahaha...

here's what i think, as you know I am in a long long FUCKING long distance relationship, and this first stanza WOW that's how i feel, bit femme but fuck it i dont care.

"I'll love you in a gentle thought,
one that yawns and stretches
across the distance between us,
uncurls its arms and unfurls its brow,
just to snuggle up next to you."

it was this first stanza that i stopped on and read a few times, how can someone capture that feeling so well...i don't know how you did it but it's great...it's brilliant..

the next stanza was cute i didnt like it as much but i didnt need to because the last stanza POW it was like a sandwich awesome cute awesome a sandwich that i will definitely continue to munch on...

Brilliant work bri, this is fantasmic!