31-01-2009, 03:32 PM
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The King of Crap
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Re: My Nostalgia
Pretty good. It's is nostaglic. I remember watching the show. I still remember how to count to eleven in French thanks to that show, it was so freaking easy.  Oh well, might as will forget it.
I think the poem should have been a little longer than this, in my opinion. More "deadness" and a little more sentimentality. Yuppers. Expand this, you can do it.
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He said, with a slight turn of his head.
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Nice piece, Rainy Boy.
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