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Re: [PICK] Communication, Desperation
Flattered, not creeped. I love your work too, so it's doubley nice. ^_^ Thanks for such a thorough comment, as always. As for your main points to fix...yeaahhh, punctuaion and I don't get along well. I always get caught up in the words and forget about it. ^_^ Your suggestions for selective capitalization are great, too. Another thing I always forget. Word just capitalizes everything for me, and I forget to go change things. Will do when I get a free moment. Again, THANK YOU very much for commenting.
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