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Old 06-03-2009, 01:07 PM
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Re: The Hound and the Rider

Well, maybe it's more of the fact that all the lines look about the same length and there aren't any spaces between the stanzas. Though adding two lines together in some places would probably make it sound a little better depending on the line.
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