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Re: Firetales: Prologue
NEW VERSION:
Ah - subtle changes, but nice. I don't remember the hunting dogs at the tavern. That cranks up the level of suspense and tension for Clare - and the reader. Little things too, like the tabby cat running in front of her. Very cinematic. It's nice to be able to go back and retro-fit our stories, isn't it? I like it very much.
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